beachbum1001's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chord Chained]

Alright.

I will keep my opinion brief. I think that this song holds potential, BUT I have a few pieces of critique for you to consider. First off, you have way to many transitions in a way too short of a time.. I mean.. there seems to be a new track coming in almost every few seconds. You can't cram all of your good musical ideas together into a few minutes, you have to space them out more and give the song time enough to properly progress without sounding too hurried to the listener. Secondly (and lastly) you need to rub some polish on this track. It doesn't matter how perfectly you place the notes, if you don't utilize the mixer and tweek the volume/bass/effects/etc your song will always come out sub-par.
To reiterate, I think that this song holds quite a bit of potential, but there are definitely a few things you need to work on before that potential can be realized. Ill be checking back sometime to see what your up to, keep improving and good work so far!

[.:Magic Runs Wild:.]

Pretty cool

I decided to take you up on that and check out your stuff. Not bad.
Pretty cool song overall, it has a nice melody to it. I do have some
critique for you however. First off, its too short and secondly I find
on some parts the fast repetition seems to take a bit away from
the song. Pretty sweet though, Ill be looking for more submissions
in the future. Oh.. and if your going to look at my stuff, make sure you
check out 'Into the Black' and 'The PARRTY'.

[.:Shrouded In Darkess:.]

Pretty cool

I like it, it has a pretty unique (and somewhat chaotic) sound to it. It definitely caught my attention because of the sound being so interesting. I think it would fit well in a suspenseful game setting. I have a bit of critique which is that some of the sounds/notes seem to be a bit out of place and awkward. Like during the build up some notes don't sound like I think they should.. but that just my personal opinion. Either way good work, and Ill be checking back for more.

GronmonSE responds:

Yeah, before the climax, there's a part that's a little bit off.

Thanks for the review, I'll review your stuff tonight :D

Released a very different song yesterday in case you'd like to check it out too.

[Nightmare Circus ReMiX]

Not bad

The song itself is fairly good but I would have to definitely say that it does not sound like it is finished let alone remixed. I guess the problem for me is that the sounds just seem to plain and I think you could achieve a much nicer sound if you chose better sounding instruments and did a bit of tweeking. Overall not bad and as it is your first song you have plenty of improving to do. Not bad, keep on improving. Ill be looking back for more.

xXTheroflkingXx responds:

Well, this isn't my first song, I mean, this is a remix of my first song, I was messing around with FL studio because I was super bored, and I decided just to remix the first song I ever made. In the process, I feel like I may have screwed something up somewhere.

[FlyMusik -- Cold Cruise]

Pretty chillin

I like it, its got a nice rhythm and flow to it. I would like to hear how it sounds with vocals.. that could make it go either way (for good or for bad). I have one piece of criticism though, I think that the repeating note in the beginning of the song is a bit too loud and kinda distracts from the rest of the song. Either way, its a chill song. Keep up the good work.

FlyMusik responds:

Yeah i was gonna make that square note softer. I'll add lyrics, though it may not turn out that great. It'll probably be a hip hop song because i'm good at rapping except i don't have that great of a voice.

[Terre d'argent_]

Chillin

This is a sick song man, really mellow really nice. You picked out
great sounds and the effects are great as well. My only criticism
would be that I don't like how its a loop that's only 45 secs long.
You should take this concept and make a full song out of it. That would
be really cool. Either way, awesome stuff. Ill be looking to hear more.

Yust responds:

Thanks man :)

[VOID-bliss And Living((li]

Cool track man.

I like it quite a bit, but I can't say that the song sounds complete.
Maybe its just me but I think that if you sliced this into FL Studio and
added a percussion score you could make this song so much more
powerful.. but thats just my personal opinion.

BinaryGuy responds:

I like your personal opinion...
thanks for the review! =)

[retared ape]

Default Sounds O My!

I think that the actual song concept is not bad at all,
but using the default sounds like that makes it some what
hard to listen to. I think that you could make this song
sound twice as good if you chose better sounds/instruments
and used the mixer to polish the song up.

Hoping to hear a mastered version in the future :)

[_/My Star\_]

Simple yet great.

I really like this tune. Its mellow and relaxing and has an overall
great sound. I have to give a 9 though as the sound quality is not
the best, it sounds some what muffled.
But besides that, awesome work. Keep it up.

ShootingStar responds:

Yeah, i don't have the best recording software...but glad you liked it!!!

ShootingStar

[Tha Moonlights Revenge]

Cool Vibe

Really like the song man, its got a real cool sound to it.
My main critique though is that its really quite repetitive.
If you threw in some lyrics this song could be really sweet.

BEATS-FOR-DA-STREETS responds:

THANX FOR THA CRITIQUE... I FEAL U ON THAT THO LYRICS WOULD GIVE IT MORE DEPTH I APPRECIATE THA FEEDBACK...